Creative On Hold Messages that Work
Content and length of on hold messages is the most crucial part of the writing process when creating telephone messages for your business telephone system.
Below is an example of how an on hold program made use of "short" and "sharp" messages to inform and reach their telephone audience.
Client: Marine Queensland Finance
Phone: 13 0076 1638
Address: 68 Commercial Drive, Shailer Park QLD 4128
Listen to the full on hold audio program.
No. |
Message |
Comment |
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1 | You know we do boat loans - but we also do car and equipment loans! Just ask one of our key team members, they will be happy to help. |
Inform you customers about other products and services they may not be aware of. |
2 | Running short of time? - Check out our website www.finance.marineqld.com.au We've got all the options for your finance and insurance needs. |
Increase traffic on your website. Let customers know they can find more information here and possible apply on line. |
3 | Finance just got real easy... Free quotes, pre approvals and fast settlements - its all here! |
Re-enforce the company's main strengths. |
4 | We cover new and pre-loved boats, and well as personal and commercial watercraft. We've got a boat loan to suit everything you need |
Educate on other forms of products the caller may have not known existed. |
5 | Hey there! Thanks for being so patient - you call is important Need more information? Check out our website www.finance.marineqld.com.au |
In a friendly manner, confirm that you understand the call is important and remind them they can visit the business website at the same time. |
6 | Get pre-approved fast! - Take a 3min application online! It's free and you do it from the comfort of your own home. |
Let the caller know they can also apply online and that it can be completed within minutes... possibly faster than waiting on hold. |
7 | Our service is obligation free! So you have nothing to loose... and everything to gain! Get out on the water now, with an industry backed marine loan |
Point out key features that makes your business stand out from the others. |
8 | We take the hassle out of sorting your finance. We'll even come to you! |
Promote great features that your customer could benefit from. |
9 | Marine Queensland Finance Your next loan when it counts! |
Highlight the company slogan to re-enforce your brand. |
Telephone: (+61) 7 5502 0264
Fax: (+61) 7 5677 0635
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2, 2 Spencer Road
Nerang, QLD 4211
2, 2 Spencer Road
Nerang, QLD 4211